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I will sacrifice
my soul to anyone who
will kiss me goodnight
©2008-2009 ~fortymudshanks
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"fear breeds need"

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nice...i like it....just goes to show what we'll do for love and affection....even if it means sacrificing your soul.....

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From 8pm to 9pm every Monday night I am entranced and engulfed in a world that is foreign to me...a world that is over dramatized...a world that is all Gossip Girl...all the time.
Perfectly captured within such a small amount of words. I applaud you. :)

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:blackrose: immortal poet, occasional storyteller
poetry admin for *DailyLitDeviations
group owner for *VampireWriters

"... forever yours, nocturnal me..."
I hear ya...loud n clear..
Thanks :)

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What would the world be like if we tried to be kind as hard as we tried to be beautiful?
:aww: Thanks a bunch!

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What would the world be like if we tried to be kind as hard as we tried to be beautiful?
:)

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What would the world be like if we tried to be kind as hard as we tried to be beautiful?
This is near perfection. One of the most beautiful haikus I've ever seen, if not THE most beautiful. I like it when people need so few words to say something so meaningful. :clap: :clap: :clap:

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All'empio non venne meno ingegno;
a rovinar di Dio tutte l'opre belle,
esto fu, pria della venuta, segno:
l'orror ch'ede il sole e l'altre stelle.
-Sika, The Fiendish Comedy-
Man, the only creature that can converse with God and dine with the Devil
Wow :aww:

Thank you very much!

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What would the world be like if we tried to be kind as hard as we tried to be beautiful?
I like it, it says a lot with little (hence the formula of a hakiu) but it also has a lot of potential themes. The final effect, what it says, who it describes, what situation, etc. I can relate to it anyhow - despite that fact that I'm a little more cautious about offering up my soul.

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